First Review Ever

I got in my first review ever on something I wrote for the Kindle and now I feel really deflated as they said nothing positive about my writing, but didn't really come out and say anything negative about the writing, but more so about the way the story was handled by me.  T___T so feeling a little down inside from it.  I feel like Kazuki Sendou from Comic Party after he makes his second comic book. I'm not sure what was meant by the over usage of Homonyms as I can't really think were I used a lot of of those unless they are referring to the fact that I had two characters with similar names, but I didn't think their names that similar to matter.  I was having a hard enough time on focusing on my projects with life/work grinding me down, and that review made it just a little harder as it seemed the only thing that got some praise was the Inside Art which I had very little hand in except to describe with pictures and words what I wanted drawn up for the scene.

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