Friday, May 10, 2013

Struggling with Chapter 13

I think it's the summer heat and my lazy nature; but been staring still at the evil chapter 13 and keep deleting it as I don't like what I keep typing; but I've finally satisifed with something I was able to write today for Chapter 13..and it's not much as don't know where to take it from here.  But thought I'd share a little of what I have written as part of Chapter 13.  Again, it is not much.  Only a little teaser of things in the Ashes of the Fallen universe's first book.

"The walls shrank in about Nadja, as she sat huddled up on the cot with her legs drawn up to her breasts.  She hated being trapped within the confines of this cell; with it’s near darkness and stale, damp air.  And worst of all the acute scent of mold growing on the far wall.   "

Sorry to say that's all i have been able to come up with so far for this chapter. Maybe I should take a break over the summer on my writing and return to it when it's more cool outside and I can focus better.

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